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I definitely did not see these twists coming! All this time I thought Keon's dad had left the family, maybe for another woman, and I had no clue that anything was up with Zahara. Great storytelling!

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Ahhh! This is so good to know! 😅 You’re never sure if the twists will truly be as shocking as you hoped and whether you’ve foreshadowed it enough but not in a way that exposes it so that’s great! This made my day 🤣

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